What do you think of my lyrics?

This is what I got so far. (ps it might look bunched, it's because I type it with my iPod touch hopefully its readable, also the '////' means a new line. Again sorry if put down weird)//////////(verse1)///Can I be your friend////// That one person who can understand////Can I be the first to realize///// There is more that meets the eyes//////When you fall asleep tonight///// I wanna be the one on your mind (chorus). You know I can only hope////Yeah///// You know I can only hope////// Yeah/////your gonna remember///////You know I can only hope, only pray////// I won't be just another number. .